Comments : Crime Scene Waltz

  • 12 years ago

    by Odessa

    I like it.

  • 12 years ago

    by alive in death

    Oh wow^ he sure was detailed... lol
    yeah this, like your usual style, is as impersonal as ever.... but it is very structured.. though there are some places scattered throughout the poem that are a little wordy... for instance lines in stanzas should be equal in rhyming scheme.... though you did end every line in a matching rhyming word....some where more complex then other lines in the same scheme...
    the topic was awesome though!
    the worm

  • 11 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    How in the world can u write poems on such broad and creative plots? i wish i posessed that kind of skill. my poems are suffering lately and not as good as usual but o well...i loved the way u told a real story. and the whole innocent getting convicted for some other persons crime is very true. i loved it, keep it up,
    love ya lots,

  • 10 years ago

    by Marius Laun

    Wow.............. It was sort of shocking. Everything about that is true. It paints a picture about some physco dancing around to this deathly sad music about how he got away with this and didn't get caught.

  • 10 years ago

    by tears i cry

    Greta flow and alot of truth this poem has one word to describe it EXCELLENT 5/5 for making me think

  • 10 years ago

    by Veamm


    i can see the emotions, and the sadness you did express your feelings well with this one!

    keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Eh, I didn't much get into it.
    It told a story, and I kind of felt the emotion, but nothing seemed to click for me...
    And the flow was off.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 3.5

  • 10 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    I think that there was a lot of great details. I really enjoyed this piece...


  • 10 years ago

    by X Harlea X

    Haha damn jen this was good. gave me more ideas for some poems.5/5