Oh wow^ he sure was detailed... lol
yeah this, like your usual style, is as impersonal as ever.... but it is very structured.. though there are some places scattered throughout the poem that are a little wordy... for instance lines in stanzas should be equal in rhyming scheme.... though you did end every line in a matching rhyming word....some where more complex then other lines in the same scheme...
the topic was awesome though!
How in the world can u write poems on such broad and creative plots? i wish i posessed that kind of skill. my poems are suffering lately and not as good as usual but o well...i loved the way u told a real story. and the whole innocent getting convicted for some other persons crime is very true. i loved it, keep it up,
love ya lots,
Wow.............. It was sort of shocking. Everything about that is true. It paints a picture about some physco dancing around to this deathly sad music about how he got away with this and didn't get caught.