A night I went insane

by FrozenTearsBleed   Jun 7, 2006


A night when I went insane,
I stabbed the razor in my vein.

A drip of blood hits the floor,
His words have hit me to the core.

A tears falls down just like the blood,
I hit the floor with a thud.

I crawled on my knees to his hand,
He helped me up, and helped me land.

He helped me land to my grave,
My pour, broken heart he can not save.

I lie there waiting to die,
I had no energy, not enough to cry.

I close my eyes and say goodnight,
He lead to the guiding light.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ViCTORiA

    U got great talent and u knw how to show ur emotions through writtin well done keep writin
    *victoria*

  • 17 years ago

    by Darkend Angel

    I really like this one... i love the way u poured ur emotions into it.
    u have great talent!

  • 17 years ago

    by The Tay

    Wow...this is amazing...ur a wonderful writer...u truly have a gift...keep writing...love taylor

  • 17 years ago

    by ShaunaMarie

    Is this about nick?? I know he hurt you... he hurt me too... but you warned me and I wouldn't listen... I'm sorry I didn't listen to you. I love you. keep writing.

  • 17 years ago

    by CuteCleaver14

    I like it, and its really sad. I hope that you never do this. And I hope that you write more poems. I also like the graduation poem.
    ~Your best friend Kayla~ aka Cleaver