Atain

by ScarletHaze   Jun 9, 2006


When one can trust and never judge
when one can stand and never fall
when one can gain yet lose it all

when one can do this all
mankind's reign shall end
for when can we ever attain such purity?
except in the ecstasy of the abyss we send?

ok this was kind of random

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  • 17 years ago

    by twisted faith

    Ok babes wot the hell have u been smokin? interestin poem babes

  • 17 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Great poem hun!

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    Thats a good poem... i loved it :)

    keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Lilly

    I liked it a lot! It kind of makes since in a twisted sort of way? Sometimes the best poems don't make a lick of sense! Awesome poem.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jamie

    Yeah this was good alothough it made absolutly no sense..like the first stanza was cool but the second one didn't really get there...still a 5/5 though..it sounded cool at least lol

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