Listen to My Words

by Extinct Angel   Jul 3, 2006


When every wound has been reopened
And in this world of give and take you must have faith
The distance where dreams seem out of reach
And your will has been bent and broken
Every vision cast into the wind
Your courage crashes down before your eyes
Cause I see in you
More than you will ever know
And I ask why
You question the strength on the inside
Don't lay down and die
You need to know
How it feels to be alive!

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  • 17 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I L-O-V-E-D the last line, so powerful and deep.....Excellent poem, really sad and full of strength....
    Okay I am really sorry to say that I have yto quit the club, I know I just signed in a week ago, but I really wanted to make a club of my own, but didn't know how, so some one aksed me to make a club with her and some one else and I accepted....I hope you don't "hate" me now?? I am really really sorry, but you know I am still here for you right?? always.....

    Much Love Sabrina

  • 17 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It did have an emotional quality but it felt...like there should have been more. Really nice for the dark undertone that did give it a more....darker atmosphere that had the helpless state displayed nicely. So really...just powerful and a cool write.
    ~Faith-less

  • 17 years ago

    by Daenerys Stormborn

    This seems like a poem you wrote to inspire yourself to enjoy life since I know you deal with a lot of depression. Very powerful and well written. Great work and take care!

  • 17 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Wow..... im speechless... short, yet so powerful. wow...

  • 17 years ago

    by Andrea broken tears

    Wow... i abusolutly LOVE this poem it is now my favotite one... you did a awesome job on this one, i love it

    andrea

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