Bring Me Far, Or Bring Me Back.

by MemoirsOfMe   Jul 17, 2006


I thought I had escaped,
The buried ruins from the past.
I guess I was mistaken;
Maybe my jouney wasn't meant to last.

I fear those ruins,
Like nothing of before.
So why am I drifting back,
When I see so many things to fight for?

My mind is a mystery I cannot solve,
Though I have all the evidence to prove.
I won't have to go back there,
But that dream is only to lose.

A battle I must fight.
One side armored, the other not.
How come I have so much faith,
When this darkness is what I sought?

Though Faith can only bring me so far,
Fate can only bring me so far back...

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  • 16 years ago

    by Leslie

    'My mind is a mystery I cannot solve.'
    I love that line. great poem!

  • 17 years ago

    by Kaila

    Wow I loved this one it was amazing yet again! nice job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Delie

    Really good! love the symbolics!
    really good writing skills someone has got here :P

  • 17 years ago

    by Arcane Blondie

    Wow-Amazing write! I love the rhyme in it and the emotion is perfectly described. My favorite part is the last two lines--They sum up the poem wonderfully---Great work-Keep it up-5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    Great poem..You have excellent potential.. and also for bein young i know its hard writin sometimes..i know this cuz i am 15..ur poem is undescribably true...awesome poem..keep writing!!

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