Children Abuse {CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme}

by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex   Aug 20, 2006


Silent songs of horror display through freezing children's veins,
Many darkened pitied nights among the saddened days remain,
Telling the stories of a child's lost, broken, battered soul,
Whispering as the child fails because of the darkened cold.
Listen closely to this child's scared cries out among the earth,
They struggle to be heard through other cries in the universe,
Realizing their lost hopes and single chance at life was a curse,
Beckoning as the tragedy creeps closer, creating pain,
Settling with the thoughts that won't stop - they are sunk in too low,
The battered children never found, on that night, what they were worth.

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The CinqTroisDecaLa Rhyme, a form created by Laura Lamarca, consists of one 10-lined stanza.
The rhyme scheme for this form is AABBCCCABC and a syllable count of each line is 15.

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  • 17 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Another good poem.
    I liked how your trying different styles of poetry and this one was touching. [Telling the stories of a child's lost, broken, battered soul] I don't know why, but this line stood out to me. I loved the word usage through out the poem, But this line was definately my favourite part.
    Well done again, You got talent. [:

  • 17 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Woah!! This is soo sad. But it was great!! 5/5 No questions asked!

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Amazing! I was trying to write one of these styles of poems, I failed horribley. This is beautifully done, and horridly sad. Great work.

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hey some of your poems are great and this poem make me feel so sad this is great for me thanks and may god bless u

  • 17 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    This was a good poem, like the style too: yet it was very sad! about the children abuse!!!

    keep it up!