Comments : The poet's heart.

  • I think the word "poet" is used too many times but that's being critical I suppose. Overall - I like the vibe I got from this poem and it tells a beautiful story. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by ReBecca

    How beautiful. I ususally dont read love poems, but this was referred as a great poem, so I read it and was touched. Great job, easy to read, nice flow.

  • 11 years ago

    by amanda

    Simply amazing!

  • 11 years ago

    by Laura

    Your penned words are original and simple yet at the same time very profound. This poem almost brought a tear to my eye. You painted a sad yet beautifdul picture of an undying love between 2 souls. I loved it so much I had to read it twice!!! Such a pleasure to read!

  • 11 years ago

    by Cuddles

    WOW!! I wish to say more, but you'll have to wait until my mind can function again. This is completely stunning.

  • 11 years ago

    by Sondos

    That was out of this world!
    So incredibly written. I have no critiscim ooh it was a sumptuous read !

  • 11 years ago

    by jessel jane

    How did you do it?I mean... wow,how in the world it touched me much... really,two thumbs up!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Knee

    Awwwww, this is absolutely TERRIFIC~!!!!
    I LOVE this poem so much...the idea was very Captivating and the title aswell!

    I'm glad you could write poems in a VERY poetic way...this is what poetry looks like..
    this poem has so many beautiful meanings...outstanding, beautiful Ryhme, very breathtaking =)

    Poets like you ain't easy to find...very great job honey keep it up
    Thanks for your Inspiration
    Best Of Luck
    NemO x0x0x0x0x0x

  • 11 years ago

    by victoria

    WOW..that is very deep,wow...i dont have any words to express that.wow...well keep on writing and inspirering.

    victoria

  • 11 years ago

    by dora

    That was s0 beautiful!! great j0b darl. very well written!! l0ved it =] xx

  • 11 years ago

    by schmaltziness

    OH-EM-GEE!!!
    5/5
    LOVE IT OH SO VERY MUCH!!!
    I totally relate to this poem alot...
    Write more okayys...
    I really enjoy it loads...
    It really touches the heart...

    `schmaltzy

  • 11 years ago

    by Deana

    This is so beautiful and enchanting , the words feel like they belong to a different time period,an era of romance and undying love, you know the kind we all want!

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Another great poem by you, you are a very talented poet with great feelings and words. i really enjoy your poetry.

  • It Should Be a Sin To Write This Good, I'm Officialy Jealous lol 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

  • 11 years ago

    by Marcus

    You are an awesome poet...you keep your poems long yet the excellence is consitent throughout the whole poem

  • 11 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    Wow, that was really something.

  • 11 years ago

    by FlirtingWithDeath

    My gosh this poem took my breath away. You seem to be doing that alot with me with your poetry. Wonderful job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Minkus

    This poem was masterfully crafted; it very well described the truth that writing the words are often much easier than saying them. The rhythm was almost flawless and the rhymes were new and refreshing. 5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by Vanessa Lea

    This poem is so long! Yet you have managed to keep each and every verse interesting and beautiful.
    Great work 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Letty

    Another masterpiece written by a very talented poet. I love this poem. It is extremely beautiful. I love your poems. You leave me speechless most of the time. lol. Keep up the wonderful work hun! 5/5

    It deserves much. much more....

    Love
    Letty