Your penned words are original and simple yet at the same time very profound. This poem almost brought a tear to my eye. You painted a sad yet beautifdul picture of an undying love between 2 souls. I loved it so much I had to read it twice!!! Such a pleasure to read!
This poem was masterfully crafted; it very well described the truth that writing the words are often much easier than saying them. The rhythm was almost flawless and the rhymes were new and refreshing. 5/5.