The STRUGGLES
by *Wishes do come true* Aug 31, 2006
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I remember the struggles, the pain and the tears |
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17 years ago
by Liz
I remember the struggles, the pain and the tears
the strength that I've endured through out the years
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^ I loved those lines. Brings hope to the reader. The poem was amazing. Heartfelt and so much emotion put into it. And I can relate to it...A LOT. Thanks for sharing this. Keep writing and thanks for the comments..btw, this is a new account...so yeh. take care. 5/5
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17 years ago
Very well done, unique, sad, myserious, this poem is a bit of everything, thanks for commenting on mine first of all and secondly keep on writing! you have great talent, xxoo
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17 years ago
by Mousie
Wow that is absolutely heartbreaking. that was a beautiful write too, lots of emotions and good flow... wonderful job, i loved it! i'm so sry for what you've been through, that's a lot for a 16 year old girl to have to handle. beautiful write.
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17 years ago
Honestly, i realy enjoyed reading the whole poem. it brought a tear in my eye, and thats becuse you where writing about something that effectde you greatly, and you got the message across. a job well done!!
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17 years ago
Wow, wonderful write. I loved it. The flow was good, however the structure needs work, perhaps breaking it into Stanzas would help. Other than that wonderful write.
Peace, Joe
