One Last Cry

by Misstress   Sep 14, 2006


A sweep
of screaming winds!
Clears a one-way road for
her fading reveries, and then
Silence.

-Cinquain-

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  • 17 years ago

    by Ksusha

    Its very nicely put. It makes me wonder if there is more of a story with it.

  • 17 years ago

    by Karma Hope

    Wow that was amazing writting in just a few lines, very good work...
    Karms.

  • 17 years ago

    by TheWorldFellNUWerentThere

    4/5 I didnt understand this one! But great writing!

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridgette

    I like this one. As a matter of fact, I think it's my favorite one by you. I'm not a big fan of cinquains, but you really took this and made something great out of it. The last line really pulled the poem together and gave it a nice sad effect. But you did a really good job on this! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by X2892

    Not 2 bad, itz very good 5/5