Scarred For Life

by twisted reality   Oct 27, 2006


Salty tears drop from her eyes,
Unable to completely disguise,
What she feared deep inside;
When no one was there to confide.

Words she cannot speak,
Come out with critique.
Her life torn totally apart,
Started from the ripping of her heart.

You never would have guessed,
That this girl really was blessed.
She just had an issue ever so slim,
That started with the mighty Him.

He gave her feathery wings,
Among many different things.
He sent her down to Earth,
To find out what life was worth.

She found out what life was like,
With those many people who like to strike.
The wings that the dear Lord gave her,
Started to become a white blur.

Finally, when she gave in,
When she had fallen apart within,
Those wings that were so white and pure,
Would never again be cured.

**Ok. Just a poem that I thought of. Random I guess you could say. It has a deeper meaning to it that it may appear, so if you guys are curious, just PM me. =) Also, I always return comments...Just leave a/some title(s) and I'll get them done ASAP**

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  • 17 years ago

    by BloodScars

    Sounded like a sex poem at the end ((like him taken her purity and virgintiy))
    but yeah it flowed weird in some spots but it was really good otherwise..
    *~BloodScars~*

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Scarred for life and after it seems in this one. Very interesting. In a couple places the rhyming seems forced which throws the flow off a bit but overall you did a good job. Especially to be only 14. You'll overcome these minor flaws with experience. I still give you a 5/5.

  • 17 years ago

    by Dark Kitten

    Wings as a symbol of innocence and hope, torn away when jaded by life here on earth. It sounds like you were feeling grieved by life and just wished to give in. ^-^ Great read, though. A poem is nothing but words on paper until the poet gives it a soul. Keep doing what you do!

  • 17 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    The first line really hooked me, well the whole first stanza actually and I was interested to see what the poem was about. It was different in a good way to say the least. I always love reading new things with new topics. Excellent job overall and great flow well done 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by AnnMarie

    For a random poem it is pretty awesome! The reader can feel the emotion, The flow makes it nice to read, and overall it is an excellent poem! Great write Sammy!

    Please r/r/c"the mirror" and if there is another that you have not read then feel free to do so!

    Thanks,
    -AnnMarie

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