by twisted reality Mar 16, 2007
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
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Crimson red petals on a slender green stem, |
by GoodMEMORIES
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I thought that it is a great write... |
by .K.i.T.t.Y.
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Wow. This poem is truly beautiful, and deep. I enjoyed this one. The only error I found was the typo in the last line. |
by Curry
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I love this poem! |
by Tammie
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I love everything about this poem. The meaning behind it, the flow, the word choice and description. The story was told so well, with a strong ending. I can't give any helpful critique, as I think that this is written perfectly for what you wanted to put across. Well done. 5/5 |
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