Comments : My wonderful poem about replying!

  • 11 years ago

    by Jessica

    [Like am man and a wife,]
    I think it should be "a" not "am"

    [But Iam not a man,]
    Needs a space between "Iam"

    [I like it more when the comment,]
    I think it should be "they" not "the"

    As a poem, this was not that great. The descriptions, good vocabulary, and flow were really lacking. Add in more details, maybe a rhyme scheme and make sure you have correct grammer and spelling. I did however, find this kind of amusing so maybe you should put it in the humor section. Nice try 3/5

  • 11 years ago

    by xxEvilAngelxx

    I think you write much better poetry when it has a deep meaning...

  • 11 years ago

    by Lenny

    That was incredibly random and hence made me laugh! Thanks! Lol.

  • 11 years ago

    by someoneimnot

    Awesome poem.for some reason i think everyone can relate to it. :P

  • 11 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    That was really good hun!
    nice poem!
    hehehe... it was kinda funny :P
    but nice!
    keep it up!

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Tthe poem reflects the truth very eloquently

  • 11 years ago

    by Anonymous

    Haha, wow, so true. I am lazy. xD 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Lauren Crandall

    Cute. i think it should be under funny but. lol. i also think the last line should be longer- maybe
    They are usually way too lazy. or something like that. i do not think this deserves a 3, so i will up vote it . =]

    x3 Lauren

  • 11 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    So true lol i usually comment on most poems I read because i know that people wanna know that others think excellent poem funny lol 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Haha, I thought this was funny, it made me giggle, it was so random.

  • 11 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Haha, niiice.

  • 11 years ago

    by Rona

    HAHAHA! I thought it was funny! Real good though! And I know what you mean. I've been posting poems here for a long time and no one has ever bothered reading any =( Well, a few maybe. heehee! Good one!

  • 11 years ago

    by Megadrive

    LOL!!! That was pretty funny=) I think you should totally expand on this poem=D I'm not sure I get the whole tan part, but it sounded funny=) I cant really say anything bad about this because it just seems like something fun to do=) so good job lol=D made me laugh!=D

  • 11 years ago

    by Kelsea

    Hahahaha! This poem made me laugh...
    I have no idea why. Good job though.

  • 11 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Lol.....very sweet was kinda funny..Good job!:D

  • 10 years ago

    by Wake

    ROFL.. omg ,, that thing right there ..bloody cracked me up .. xD

    amazing .. and i must say.. quite true :P

    heheh.. keep it up



  • 9 years ago

    by NiQk

    It was kinda funny... idk i didnt really fall in love with it. xP