[Like am man and a wife,]
I think it should be "a" not "am"

[But Iam not a man,]
Needs a space between "Iam"

[I like it more when the comment,]
I think it should be "they" not "the"

As a poem, this was not that great. The descriptions, good vocabulary, and flow were really lacking. Add in more details, maybe a rhyme scheme and make sure you have correct grammer and spelling. I did however, find this kind of amusing so maybe you should put it in the humor section. Nice try 3/5

I think you write much better poetry when it has a deep meaning...

That was incredibly random and hence made me laugh! Thanks! Lol.

Awesome poem.for some reason i think everyone can relate to it. :P

That was really good hun!
nice poem!
hehehe... it was kinda funny :P
but nice!
hehehe...
keep it up!

Tthe poem reflects the truth very eloquently

Haha, wow, so true. I am lazy. xD 5/5

Cute. i think it should be under funny but. lol. i also think the last line should be longer- maybe
They are usually way too lazy. or something like that. i do not think this deserves a 3, so i will up vote it . =]

x3 Lauren

So true lol i usually comment on most poems I read because i know that people wanna know that others think excellent poem funny lol 5/5

Haha, I thought this was funny, it made me giggle, it was so random.

Haha, niiice.

HAHAHA! I thought it was funny! Real good though! And I know what you mean. I've been posting poems here for a long time and no one has ever bothered reading any =( Well, a few maybe. heehee! Good one!

LOL!!! That was pretty funny=) I think you should totally expand on this poem=D I'm not sure I get the whole tan part, but it sounded funny=) I cant really say anything bad about this because it just seems like something fun to do=) so good job lol=D made me laugh!=D

Hahahaha! This poem made me laugh...
I have no idea why. Good job though.

Lol.....very sweet poem...it was kinda funny..Good job!:D
xxPoojaxx

ROFL.. omg ,, that thing right there ..bloody cracked me up .. xD

amazing .. and i must say.. quite true :P

heheh.. keep it up

xD

~Wake~

It was kinda funny... idk i didnt really fall in love with it. xP