Hardwood Floor

by Natalie   Nov 29, 2006


Cascading rain splashed,
Against hardwood floor,
Thunder shook beneath,
The earths nourished core,
Lightening striked vessels,
Through misty downpour.

_This WAS meant to be a poem entered in our contest between EOP & POET. But I had no time to finish it. It's still not finished either.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Nicole Nolen

    Great flow to the poem...

  • 17 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    !!! that poem was very nice and I enjoyed reading it
    Its poems like these that make me happy I happened to come upon them
    Great job and keep writing porfavor (please, haha)

    If you could please read/rate my poem Classic Love Song, I appreciate it
    I return the favor if you comment back

  • 17 years ago

    by *Isolde*

    Great poem, its nit that bad. 4/5...keep it up.

  • 17 years ago

    by Darien

    Way to go Nat!!.. Wow, it's not done?! There's more to it!! OMG! I wanna read!!.. I am still very upset about my computer crashing. *Sigh*

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    This flows so well! That really stood out to me as i read it, it all worked together. This is quite a unique poem i think, and it's well written, yet again. =] 5/5

    Tammie xo

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