These Porcelain Tears

by Bryan   Jan 1, 2007


The sun sets on her Porcelain Face,
tears roll down her cheeks in such disgrace.
For a love that was forgotten, no one really cares,
the pain she shows is too much for her to bare.

Writing her final note, no one around to see,
what she's been through, how hard life can be.
So she sits on her bed, with a pen and some paper,
waiting on her Prince Charming to come and save her.

She writes down her feelings, each and every day,
hoping her true love will come and take her pain away.
Wait as she might, her Prince Charming never shows,
writing down her feelings, but the torture never goes.

So she swallows the pills, lays the bottle by the bed,
and finishes writing her note, this is what it said,
"If my Prince Charming finds this, don't have any fear,
I will die here now with these Porcelain Tears."

Bryan Hunt © 2006

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  • 16 years ago

    by TwistedAngel xx

    Beautiful opening to the poem. Really tender and sweet.

    "Writing her final note, no one around to see,
    what she's been through, how hard life can be.
    So she sits on her bed, with a pen and some paper,
    waiting on her Prince Charming to come and save her."

    ^^^
    beautiful part of the poem. Its heartbreaking and sweet at the same time.

    "She writes down her feelings, each and every day,
    hoping her true love will come and take her pain away.
    Wait as she might, her Prince Charming never shows,
    writing down her feelings, but the torture never goes."

    ^^^
    That is so true. I can really relate to that section. well written.

    Amazing ending. You have a great gift with words.

    well done
    ^_^

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Very emotional and captivating through the whole poem. I like the descriptions and you did very good job with rhymes. The topic is great, too.
    You managed to express all feelings in a great way. The first stanza is my favorite.
    Keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by xXMikansexNoxGuiltXx

    =] Bryan!! Awesome!
    You've gotten so much better!
    >=] I need to catch up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Corruption

    Wow this is great i think this is my fav by you so far i love the last two lines great job *claps* and thanks for the comment

    keenan

  • 16 years ago

    by caitlin

    Very intriguing poem, it made a sad picture in my mind. I loved the poem.

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