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by Faceless Mirror Jan 21, 2007
Sadness, depression /
In the deepest underground I feel no fear.
Nothing can make my body shake,
thus the walls are white!
I'm lost in myself, no one will hear.
Unanswered, it's the birth of silence,
leaving a dying man behind!
A peaceful dream, random as reasons.
Slipping through the tip of my fingers,
fragments of vast memories.
The sea of constant changing seasons.
Winter awaits and autumn arrives,
repeating the same song for centuries.With the colors of autumn snowflakes fall.Tranquility!Â© Kenneth GjÃ¸se (Faceless Mirror)
Wow you really are a unique and excellent writer! great flow and great idea again wonderful job 5/5
by Tara Kay
I actually like the last word "Tranquility", it made the poem finish well.
keep it up
This is awsome dude, love the wording, paints alot of pictures for the reader, 5/5!!! leep it up!!!
I didn't understand this quite myself, but it could just be me.
by Sandra D
This is my favorite poem of yours, it's amazing!!! i love how you wrote it, and the words you used, and it flowed so well. you're an amazing writer, i can't wait for you to write more poems!!!