Mixed Up

by Dark Demise   Mar 13, 2007


Rising above you,Running threw you,Punishing you for what you've done,
Guilt drives us all to the point where we don't want to face our feelings
Confession to yourself,I've done wrong, A mark left on you that always stings,
Hiding, Covering up, Ashamed,don't want to take the blame,
Grieving,Loss,Sorrow, Driving you insane,

Nothing is the way it seems,
And no one is the way they show,
Because the wrong doesn't leave, it continues to grow

Lack of sleep because of you,
Caught in the life style you go threw,
Lack of thought because of you,
Caught in your plight that you grew

I'm playing the blame game all over again,
I'm forgetting all I stood for and giving in,

High strung on everything you feel,
These scars remain they don't seem to heal,
Tendency to give into there ways,
Turn off course, get lost in the maze,

Find your way back,
Prepare for every type of attack
I need a way out, Away from sin
Time to start all over again.

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I wrote this poem, By mixing up different lines from other poems I've written,
Wrapped it all up and put it together and posted it
Hope you enjoy
-Eric-

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  • And yet, another beautiful poem. The words in this were inspiring. Although, you should try fixing thr first stanza, make it look like the other stanzas. Great poem though.

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 10 years ago

    by Kalee

    This is a very creative way to write a poem. It worked very well. This is a great poem. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 10 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Nice write, the flow was good as well as the structure, keep up the good work.

    Peace, Joe

  • 10 years ago

    by mnemosyne

    Hum, a very interesting and raw piece. I really enjoyed the style and atmosphere this had. There were a few spelling errors, "threw" needing to be "through" etc, which really pulls me out of the piece and makes me think about technicalities. Once cleaned up nice and spiffy though, this piece is a definite wonderful read.

    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 10 years ago

    by Tahniya

    This is a very unique poem! i really liked it!
    keep up the great work
    :)

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