Comments : The angel within

  • 10 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    How interesting i can relate to this poem a little i liked it 5/5 perhaps you can read one of mine

  • 10 years ago

    by Lemon Squeezy

    Nicely written not a topic many people write about very interesting good job.

  • 10 years ago

    by robin milford

    This is beautiful poem u r right it is on the same lines as mine. Thanks for your comment on "Inner Beauty"

  • 10 years ago

    by smithy

    Anotha wel nice poem. ur a rly talentd 15 yr old!

    ...::FA::...

  • 10 years ago

    by Cathy

    Wow girl you really do have talent! This is another wonderful, beautiful poem, I'm adding this one also to my favorites. You words are very inspirational, and I feel a little better reading this, this poem is a realy spirit lifter.

  • 10 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Hey hun,
    Thank you for your comment, its much appreciated!
    Anyways this poem... was amazing. I loved your repitition of "You dreamed you were an angel", especially in the first stanza, becuase your words drew me in, the flow was really good, and worked really well. I liked how each stanza symbolised a sifferent side, like the first stanza was her dreaming she was an angel, the secound was her thinking she wasnt and then the final stanza was how she acctually was an angal in your eyes. It was really excellent! Your rhyming was good and didnt seemed forced. Overall it was a really amazing read! Keep it up! xx

  • 9 years ago

    by Marylou L

    Excellent word choice

  • 9 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Excellent poem... very beautiful... the last stanza is amazing and the concept behind is great...

    great work...

  • 7 years ago

    by Marcus blake

    You only dreamed you were an angel,
    But when I look at you I see,
    I see an angel staring back,

    that's dope i dig keep it up