Seasons of Equal Beauty (Diamante)

by Lu   Mar 24, 2007


__________ Spring __________
_____ precious, beautiful _____
__blooming, growing, breathing __
fragrant, flowers, spectacular, leaves
__ dying, cleansing, harvesting __
_____ vivacious, graceful _____
___________ Fall ___________

Though these seasons
may be opposite
one season breathes life
death slowly takes the
breath of the other
both are equal in beauty

DIAMANTE :

Line 1: Noun or subject
Line 2: Two Adjectives describing the first noun/subject
Line 3: Three -ing words describing the first noun/subject
Line 4: Four words: two about the first noun/subject, two about the antonym/synonym
Line 5: Three -ing words about the antonym/synonym
Line 6: Two adjectives describing the antonym/synonym
Line 7: Antonym/synonym for the subject

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  • 9 years ago

    by Gem

    You've put me in the mood to try another one of these.
    Just waiting for the damn writers block to lift! lol
    But seriously, this one is a prefect speciman of a diamante poem
    Well done Lu
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 9 years ago

    by Timothy r

    Luanne, Luanne, such a great diamante. I liked doing this form so much, it`s great practice. I also loved your topic..yes..a fuzzy feeling indeed. Kudos, Timothy

  • 9 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Bravo, dear friend. I have to admire and applaud anyone who does structure poetry. I never seem to get mine to turn out. Beautiful words.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 9 years ago

    by Poetess

    I miss writing these types of poems. I really loved this one. It gave me some warm fuzzy feeling. Hehe. ;p Truly, a beautiful write. Never stop writing! 5/5

    ` Liz

  • 9 years ago

    by Cindy

    Luanne
    Nice job on your formed poetry :)

    Really beautiful
    Take Care Love Cindy