War*

by Aussie   Apr 11, 2007


Aim the canyons
dig the ditches
stay on your toes
you know it all

shoot'em all
don't gain prisoners
they're against you
with the enemy

don't believe a word
your say is right
there's no other way
hay, you're winning the war
you got the last word

you wonna kill the enemy no
just aim the gun at ya head
then pull the trigger
oh, no, you lost the war

this feld here
have no wining round
when you're fighting
against your self

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  • 8 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Hope i spelled it right;)

  • 8 years ago

    by KemistryKia

    Loved it in all of its entirenty

  • 9 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    This is a sad poem its beautiful tho! Im starting to write poems again after 2 years... I've already posted one i'd like u to read it.

  • 9 years ago

    by Cliche Fairytale Ending

    Great poem. it remind s me of how i feel right now because my dads over in iraq

  • 9 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Yeah it's hard when you have a word going on with yourself. You never win if you are not happy with the decision you made. Great poem. 5/5
    -vino

    Oh yeah is that suppose to be field in the last stanza?