Wow. I am not sure there are other words to describe the way you wrote this poem! The descriptivness was completely facinating, and you went so in depth that I had to read on. My eyes never left the screen, and I read over and over those words of life.
Oh, to be honest, I was not expecting this. you advertised this poem in such a negative light, when you should be so proud of a such astounding work. really beautiful and deep and great word choices, impressive to say the least.
Wow.. so i absolutely LOVE the last line to this poem.. its so simple and strong and the same time.. the vibe this poem gives off is also really strong.. the wording is fantastic and villed with clear images .. another excellent write :D
I have been reading all your poems, and i am in awe! i love your poetry, every single poem is utterly amazing. i particulary liked this one, your use of words is just so elegant yet creates a really hard hitting point which is such a skill.
these lines struck me
"A piece of miniature
artwork in which Radiance
This was a damn good poem. the way you used the words and the free form style was amazing. it flowed from sentence into sentence perfectly. i also liked the depth of it. how you used the doll as a mirror of perfection to compare humanity to.
Love is the law
Love under will
I think 'illumined' should be illuminate?
I thought this write was excellent, especially how you ended it so sweetly. I really liked the language you've used and the overall feeling of the poem because it has depth and sounds sincere - really excellent piece well done :)
This is an interesting one.. The whole time I was thinking it was about a person. But is it? In the end you say the subject is a doll. But the whole thing seems so much more complex than that! Amazing, darling!