Comments : Fascination

  • 10 years ago

    by shawn

    Ok, so i have to say that was absolutly amazing, i love the way it is put together and especially the word usage, you somehow made it all fit together so perfectly. 10/5

  • 10 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    This was a great poem, great wording good vocab. It flowed really well!! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Yuna

    Wow. I am not sure there are other words to describe the way you wrote this poem! The descriptivness was completely facinating, and you went so in depth that I had to read on. My eyes never left the screen, and I read over and over those words of life.

    The poem facinated me till the end! Great job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Gem

    "A piece of miniature
    artwork in which Radiance
    lingers forever."

    Excellent part.
    The way you write is so smooth and fluid.
    It's really amazing, it's a type of writing i have yet to master.
    teach me dammit! lmao
    Seriously, wonderful piece
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 10 years ago

    by Romantic Lover

    That was a different poem than I'm used to reading. Very well crafted.
    Keep it up.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jeffrey

    Oh, to be honest, I was not expecting this. you advertised this poem in such a negative light, when you should be so proud of a such astounding work. really beautiful and deep and great word choices, impressive to say the least.

  • Great poem.
    The flow was great and your choices were good.
    You are a talented writer.
    Keep it up 5/5

    [Sarah]

  • 10 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Excellent peice of wrk!!......great loved it!...
    Beautifully penned!...perfecto1...hats off to u!
    sure 5/5!...

  • 10 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow.. so i absolutely LOVE the last line to this poem.. its so simple and strong and the same time.. the vibe this poem gives off is also really strong.. the wording is fantastic and villed with clear images .. another excellent write :D

  • 10 years ago

    by repair her heart

    Wow i couldnt take my eyes off the whole time. it was just so pretty and just it flowed so smoothly. it painted this picture in my imagination. BEAUTIFUL!

  • 10 years ago

    by Bonnie Rose

    I have been reading all your poems, and i am in awe! i love your poetry, every single poem is utterly amazing. i particulary liked this one, your use of words is just so elegant yet creates a really hard hitting point which is such a skill.

    these lines struck me
    "A piece of miniature
    artwork in which Radiance
    lingers forever."

    just amazing!added you to my favs!

  • 10 years ago

    by x Mo x

    Cute...well actually beautful! The description was amazing, and the flow and the way it rolled off my tongue was perfect! I love it! Keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Birgit

    Heeeeeeeelloooo You ^^,

    Nice poem =) Nice flow and your choice of words is so good! =)

    xxx Lots of love<3

  • 10 years ago

    by Rocky

    This was a damn good poem. the way you used the words and the free form style was amazing. it flowed from sentence into sentence perfectly. i also liked the depth of it. how you used the doll as a mirror of perfection to compare humanity to.
    Great work
    Love is the law
    Love under will
    Rocky

  • 10 years ago

    by Corruption

    Great poem i love the way it is set up it makes it way cooler lol good flow also and thanks for the comment

    keenan

  • 10 years ago

    by Sandra D

    Wow, this was great!
    the flow was wonderful, and your word choice was amazing!
    this is the kind of poem that makes me jealous, great job! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by RavishingEruption

    That is awesome in an almost sick and twisted way. Very good. Nice flow.

  • 10 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    I love the darkness this is a fine piece of work

  • 10 years ago

    by Ariana

    I think 'illumined' should be illuminate?
    I thought this write was excellent, especially how you ended it so sweetly. I really liked the language you've used and the overall feeling of the poem because it has depth and sounds sincere - really excellent piece well done :)

  • 10 years ago

    by ALEX

    This is an interesting one.. The whole time I was thinking it was about a person. But is it? In the end you say the subject is a doll. But the whole thing seems so much more complex than that! Amazing, darling!
    Best wishes!