The Perfect Guy

by BeautifulxMess   Apr 17, 2007


Slowly drifting away into your everlasting eyes.
Looking into emerald diamonds that shine so bright.
Your long black eyelashes raise to the blue skies.
The color of love glazes my way into the dark night.

Skin so soft caress my body into an ecstasy.
Silky as satin brushes across my bare face.
Breathtaking as your touch thats like a fantasy.
It comforts me when I feel out of place.

Lips sweet as candy that long to always satisfy.
A bittersweet sugar rush races through my veins.
Tongue tied words that soar my wings to fly.
A soft touch lessens away all my pain.

If only I could describe everything about you.
I'd go on forever because it could never die.
All I know is that I have a love that is true.
Everything about you makes you the perfect guy.

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  • 9 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Very enticing poem. I'm not into guys, but if I was... that would be excellent. The way you make the reader see your vision is extraordinary. I was completely lost in the amazing write. Good flow, great word usage, and the concept was beautiful... 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by LiisaMariie143

    Goshh you have really good love poemsss. i like them alott. good job.

  • 9 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Love the ending to this poem... very nice.

    from beggining to end it was amazing.i give you a 5/5.

    keep it up! =]

  • 10 years ago

    by mohamad aref numan

    Your poems are really awsome

  • 10 years ago

    by ctmskm

    Nice choice of words. the poem flows smoothly and shows good emotion. keep it up.. 5/5

    ctmskh