Without you...

by Alex   Apr 22, 2007


Without you... You ly and ly, and I try and try, I don't know why it effects me, I don't know if I'm over you, but I know I want to.

Without you... Looking at the sky makes me want to cry..

Without you... I can't eat...But thank God I can sleep..

Without you... I like going places, lets me forget, but when I get home, I take the dip.

Without you... How did I get in this mess? I just wish myself the best.........

Without you... Roses are red, violets are blue, but I'm still here....Without you....

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Writen for a guy I just broke up with....I really thought I would walk down the aisle to him...I thought he was the one.

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  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!...the emotion is so well penned in this one.very baeutiful work...excellent word choice!
    Lovely write!Kp it up!

    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Austin

    Such a great poem to read..one of your better ones, i liked it. Sucks about the boyfriend, ive thought before bout my girlfriend...but $hi* happens ive been told @_@

  • 16 years ago

    by ImNotPerfect20

    Very good!! i know how you feel.. Most my poems are about my ex.. i though he could of been the one for me but he had other plans..
    but dont worry.. your young.. there will be more boys!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Gem

    "ly = lie" as a side note.

    On to the poem. Your free verse is really coming along!
    You have the emotion nailed and the language is spot on. You can feel the loss in the words.
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

    (P.S. Don't worry, it feels bad now but your only 14, there'll be tons of guys =)

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