Aww, tha was so sweet! =] i can se the love and emotion, and then at the ending, the confusion, its touching, deep and beautifully written, about a beautiful subject..love =]
i love it!
keep it uppy!
nuff luv xx
Amazing. Beautiful. You've managed to make me think of the past. That's quite hard to do. That's bad for me not you lol. Wonderful poem. I think you are a wonderful writer. DO NOT STOP OR I WILL HURT YOU =D Thank you. lol Keep writing.
Wow. this poem really got to me. this is exactly how i feel about my ex. he still loves me but the distance killed our relationship.. we lost contact for w few months now but im sendin him a letter in the morning. i jus wanted to let u know that this poem is making me want to get back in touch with my first true love.. amazing poem!!
Nicely written piece of poetry. I can relate as I'm sure many others can as well. I liked your wording and the imagery within this poem. I however, felt that you could of had some puncuation within this poem, it would help with the flow and let the readers know when to pause or stop reading for a moment. Overall it was a well thought out poem which has emotions in which many can relate, well done keep up the great work.