Lovely poem....sooo beautiful...a great dedication..Well done!and the imagery creatd is also nice!...Good wrk!Kp it up!
I give a 5/5!
xxPoojaxx

This is wonderful! really beautiful.. keep up the great work! 5/5

Awesome poem. I really did love it, because it has a nice flow and I liked the words you used. Keep up the great work:) 5/5

I love nature poems and thats why i decided to read this last lol. Anyways i have to say i loved this poem. The begining of the poem you use alliteration straight away, "sun shines smile" i really liked this. It engages the reader. I liked how you dedicated this poem to your brother. Im sure he would of loved to read it. And he'd be very proud of his sis! ;) So its a really sweet read. And for an nature poem very emotional! An amazing read hun. Keep it up! xx

It is so sweet of you to write such a great poem for your brother, i love your comparision through out the poem, great job as always.
keep up the great work, and off course a 5/5 as you really deserve it.

This is so sweet. Your comparsion though out the poem was diffrent, and excellent. It is touching that you wrote/dedcaited this poem for your brother. The emtion was strong and deep. excellent work.

Ah how sweet, ure bro means a hell of a lot to you well done that was lovely 5-5

I'm sorry that your brother is gone.
But remembering the good times
like this poem, is great!
This poem showed everything good
about nature and spending outdoors
with a loved one
very well written!

Thats too bad im sorry but he will live on in your heart 5/5

Nice poem. I like it ,has nature theme and a
wonderful memory, expression.5/5.

Best wishes.

Hm.
I'm disliking the non-rhyming, again. It really would have flowed beautifully if it had rhymed.

But, anyways, it was beautiful nonetheless. The description was strong, the use of words was quite catching, and it flowed very nicely.

Though, is this supposed to be multipul Haikus? If so, a few of the syllables are off.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

This was a beautifull dedication. I loved it alot and enjoyed it being a nature poem. Im unsure if this is supose to be multiple haikus. If it is the syllable counts off in some parts, if not ignore that lol. Loved this poem. Well done~mel

I'm sorry for your lost :( Well keep in mind you're brother is proud for you. Anyway

The flow was okay for me. I like the imagery running in this poem. Fantastic work! And I like the ending. Well done! keep up the good work! You're really talented!

Sorry for the loss hun! life is tough sometunes. I think u did a good job with this one.
Bree

This is so beautiful...
The imagery portrayed in this created very vivid pictures, and the emotion and depth behind the words are clear for all to see.
You did a wonderful job with this.

This is absolutely stunning! Such a beautiful poem! The imagery is very well done also! 5/5
.x

Great poem, beautifully penned. I like the imagery in it, it's truly wonderful. It deserves 5/5.

Very beautiful and heartfelt poem. I think it's a great way to show your love for your brother and I'm sorry for your loss. Although, the flow was a little off here it was still a great read. 5/5

marcella

Amazingly written poem. It is very touching. Imagery is excellent. I really enjoyed in this piece. 5/5

Lovely. This piece when I read it was
great, I like how it flows so nicely
together. I give a 5/5!