Waiting

by The Pessimistic Peabody   May 11, 2007


Waiting for my death
Not wanting to die
Waiting for the truth
Not wanting a lie

Waiting to be heard
Not wanting to be dumb
Waiting to feel pain
Not wanting to be numb

Waiting for the world
Not wanting to be first
Waiting for a cure
Not wanting this great curse

Waiting for whats fair
Not wanting a whole lot
Waiting for a soul
Not wanting what I've got

Don't downvote for your lack of understanding, if you feel you are puzzled, don't even bother commenting

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  • 16 years ago

    by desiring love

    I understand it and it's good!

  • 16 years ago

    by Tabitha

    Yea, it was confusing at first, but i got it at the end! another one of your great poems! keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by MyEscape

    I like that you stick to a steady rhythm and rhyme. Your lines all starting the same way in the same pattern is very effective and helps the reader keep with the poem. Nice job!
    *ME*

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Great work. well written. all together awesome.. keep it up 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    Goodjob,very powerful
    keep it up!

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