Blue Sky

by Rach   May 18, 2007


These tears stream down my face
As I sit here in complete silence
Your voice echo's beyond
These walls that surround me

I can see your face
In the distance
Its so clear in the
Bright blue sky

I see your hand
Reach out to me
With a simple touch
I know its going to be ok

You give me a smile
Before your face fades away
And im just left with a
Blank blue sky

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hebe

    Great poem.
    Beautiful piece of writing.
    Really enjoyed reading it.
    Take care

  • 16 years ago

    by geeeeee

    "You give me a smile
    Before your face fades away
    And im just left with a
    Blank blue sky"

    This was such a beautiful and poignant write.
    It seems the things we truly love, just slowly over time, begin to fade away. Great write :)

    Take Care.

  • 16 years ago

    by xxSnow Angelxx

    Wow!!
    Very cute poem..love the ending n it was a beautifully penned write!
    Good job!
    xxPoojaxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Princess

    I like it its realli cute =]] 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Wake

    OMG...that was beautiful.. loved the ending,everything...

    a very good write..keep it up

    great job :D 5/5

    ~Wake~

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