Trapped

by Rach   May 22, 2007


Trapped inside this world
I've created for myself
can't escape, can't remain
what am i to do?

From the moment i awake
until i close my eyes
everything i do and say
is this perfect good disguise

Everywhere i look
and everything i do
reminds me I'm not perfect
that my life is so untrue

You don't understand
whats it's like to be me
living this trapped life
thats oh so dreary

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  • 18 years ago

    by Hebe

    Realistic poem.
    Beautiful written.
    Great rhyme, a pleasure to read.
    Take care

  • 18 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Sometimes I feel like that...
    Short but effective, 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    Ack, at times i feel trapped too...
    but i guess everyone has a point in their life when they feel that way.

    5/5 love.

    keep writing, i'm always here to read :)

  • 18 years ago

    by STEVE

    I really do know what you mean in the way you expressed yourself and the words you used to show how you feel Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by xx Ali xx

    I love it!!♥

    keep writing...it says you don't think you're good...i really think you are. Keep writing, it just gets your feelings out. atleast that's what it does for me. have a good day!

    if you need to talk or just let everything out...you can always message me, i don't judge people.. :)
    I've also been through some stuff it talks about in your poems..

    ~Ali

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