A trip without a place to remember

by Drew Gold   May 20, 2007


Tell the artists what you think of time
and of their soft and chalky lips,
tell them candy canes and lime
have naught to do with thoughts like this.

tell the brooding fellow not to err
into deadened nerves, congealed blood.
show him that the fruit is hooked
upon the vine like christmas lights:

come tumbling down, the fingers veer
like children through dark lanes of snow,
to catch and claim that bit of year;
glitter sunlight until they disappear.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Angstluver

    Have you published anything? Your work is certainly publishable. It's that good.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Magnificent! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by KeyxMashingxParody

    That was flawless, the rhyme scheme was so unique! 5/5