This poem was fairly amusing and delightful to read, indeed; plus, seeing a humorous piece written in a poetic form was uncommon these days. Additional props for that. :) Thanks for giving me a chuckle!
11 years ago
Wow. it was nicely written, i am still laughing from it, lol. i didn't use a condom and i lost all my freedom to my 7 month old. it was nicely written and it was a pleasure to r/r/c this for you, 5/5 easy
Hehe, some parts made me laugh :D. The flow was great, and your choice of words complemented your own unique style :D!! I don't really know what else to say for this poem, except for keep it up, and 5/5
Witha ll due respect,
P.S. Thanks for the RRc on "Shalua and Skelke (ballade)"