I love this and i feel this same way. for whatever reason, people have to suffer heartbreak and sadness. that's how i relate to your poem. people can take this into so many differetn aspects of their own lives, an i think that's what's so great about this particular one. amazing job! :) would you please rrc my new one, "put to rest" and "find the cure"?
This was very good. once again your work is beautiful. its simple yet grabbed me completely into it. the last stanza was my fav. this is a poem alot of ppl will be able to relate to. it reminds me so much of myself. i loved it. incredible.