by Corinne   Jul 8, 2007


It happens slowly
Minute by minute
Second by second

You withdraw from life
You withdraw from friends
You withdraw from you

Your thoughts darken
Your heart is poisioned
Desperation twists you

What your mind tells you
What you've become
What your world is

It is not
You are not
Who you were


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  • 8 years ago

    by ilikepurple222

    I love this and i feel this same way. for whatever reason, people have to suffer heartbreak and sadness. that's how i relate to your poem. people can take this into so many differetn aspects of their own lives, an i think that's what's so great about this particular one. amazing job! :) would you please rrc my new one, "put to rest" and "find the cure"?

  • 8 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Very powerful grabs you from the start ...amazing write 10/5

  • 9 years ago

    by Fading Memory

    RIP johnny cash

    niley truley done !

  • 9 years ago

    by Jay Perry Jr

    Very deep i love it

    Good jpb 5/5

  • 9 years ago

    by blackheartslove

    This was very good. once again your work is beautiful. its simple yet grabbed me completely into it. the last stanza was my fav. this is a poem alot of ppl will be able to relate to. it reminds me so much of myself. i loved it. incredible.