Wow...This was really good...It had a lot of deep emotion...I couldn't stop reading it!!

I feel the same way about my boyfriend and I he's the only reason I'm here today...

Anway...I really loved this...Keep up the great writting!!

...this is extremely emotional! I can't critique this! It's too darn painful and heart wrenching! I can understand about parents fighting and how it hurts. Anyways, I like the stanza where she prays. It almost made me cry, seriously! I could hear a voice of crying girl as she prays to god. It's fantastic. 5/5

That was absolutey amazing you dont even need comments you are fantastic i cant see whats to critisize! im just gob smacked thats just well makeing me speechless i cant find the words you are amazing and now 1 of my favourite writers!

I liked this one alot more then the last because the emotions you portrayed throughout it were beautifully sad, strong and powerful. You went into great depth with this piece to me I couldn't find any flaws what so ever. I'm sure so many people can relate to this as I know I can. Loved this. Definitly a good read and i'm sure an even better write. Well done. ~mel

Wow!!!!!!!! that wuz great. I really liked it. It kinda took meh to a diff world. 5/5 GREAT JOB AGAIN! ^_^ Keep it up!!!

This piece is also amazing. Strongly worded and flowing flawlessly. The structure is nice plus the word choice is just the best. You managed to keep me engaged :)

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Fsams

Very nice job. i liked it alot.. i can feel the emotions comming from this one. 5

LOVED IT KEPT ME WANTING MORE

Wow !!! im speechless! this poem has so much depth and emotion put into it...i really enjoyed reading it..the flow was perfect and it was just beautifully written....

your a very talented person..dont let anyone bring your spirit down..your amazing at what you do so dont let anyone tell you any different....keep it up! good job!

~Michelle~

Now this is absolutely beautiful! So much emotion, it was a really powerful poem. Great story to it. Nice job. 5/5

marcella

Now this is absolutely beautiful! So much emotion, it was a really powerful poem. Great story to it. Nice job. 5/5

marcella

Holy hell.. This has honest to god got to be one of my favorite poems. I love it, and its absolutely flawless. You have amazing talent.

Holy hell.. This has honest to god got to be one of my favorite poems. I love it, and its absolutely flawless. You have amazing talent.

Very powerful, greatly written. You portrayed emotions excellently, and the imagery is very vivid in the whole piece, I could picture the whole scene unfolding in front of my eyes. The flow is very good, too.

WOW!!! omg! this has gotta be the most amazing poem i ever read! i swear! the way you told was so sad and the ending was joyful... wow.. i'm totally speechless.. this poem is beyond words to describe how great this is.. BRILLIANT POEM!

Your showing tru versatility at this point. I read your erotic material and now reading this I realized your more than just a erotic writer. Ur good at what u do going to read more.

This is so strong
the way youcombine life scenes and prays makes the poem so expressive, emphasises the emotion in it+it fits the idea of "fallen angel" so well, all these contrasts
5/5

Oh my.... I am speechless. This was incredible! It truly was. I love how it started off with more despair, yet it ended with like a glimmer of hope. :] Beautifully written, m'dear. Overall: 5.5

- Steph.

As usual terrific job!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love this poem. I feel how u felt here. This is beautifully put. U can tell that u put so much emotion in 2 this. So much feeling, and heart is just tugged when u read something this wonderful. 5/5