Here I go... One more time

by AhmadAfaneh   Jul 28, 2007


Here I go ... One more time
Stuck in between lines of misery
Here I go ... One more time
Roaming in the time of infinity

Estrangement just gets so long
Darkness just gets darker ...
Clashing gets so harsh
For how long will I be a fighter ??

Clueless, hopeless ... I struggle in life
And no one just seems to care
Tearful, cold ... I walk through this life
To show how life is so unfair

For how far will I go
To escape my past
For how long will I hang
To get a new start

Red roses turned to black
The soul I used to have wilted
Weak.. I try to gather my debris
But its just that every beautiful thing in me have melted

Here I go ... One more time
Blaming myself for her mistakes
Here I go ... One more time
Drowning in the lies that she fakes

Here I go ... One more time
Staring at useless words I write
Here I go ... One more time
Looking for the light.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crimson Princess

    This is a good poem. i like the way it is wrote and the way you express your feelings. i say keep the work up. you are very talented. and i hope to see new work from you.
    -Crimson Princess

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Excellent dude, the poem is 99.9% poetic and the wordings are great. The caption and the content is cohesive and the lexis used is coherent. Great write with mournful feelings depicted. I would just suggest you to shorten the 20th sentence. 5/5 all the way

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr M

    This type of poem where the writer blames himself is always so well written yet so sad. Sadness like this arises from giving others the power to conduct how we feel...usually the only mistake we make. A good read.

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Hm. Not bad.
    I like the emotion emitting from it; I could actually feel what you might have, which is good.
    And I love the repition of "Here I go..one more time."
    Usually I wouldn't, but it really fits in this poem; nicely done. =]

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by sara

    I can actually feel the sadness of this poem keep it up 5/5

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