Great poem.
Emotional and deep.
Really enjoyed reading it.
Well done
Take care

Wow, what a great peice you have written! I loved the creativity that you used throughout the poem, and you flow was very good. i enjoyed reading this poem because it was so unique. i think my favourite lines; the on that really spoke to me and captured me were;
'Ah! Good Heavens,
Let the stars blush'
I love the imagery in the blushing stars. very unique indeed. And also your ending was very powerful, with the repeated wnd word. A really great write.
5/5
xxx

I've never seen this form of poetry written by someone on here before. I'd only ever come across this type of poetry once before, yet it was written by a famous poet. It was interesting, and seemingly difficult. Well done you for pulling it off, it's very well written.

The imagery was amazing, and wording - fantastic. Good job.

This was amazing and impressive
it had a great form
it flowed smoothly
and it was just a great read.
The second part is what blew me away
great job
and very nice ending

5/5

A unique and difficult style to right, yet you found a beautiful flow . Mmm I'm impressed . A great choice of words . You blew me away . The emotion coming from this is subtle and yet completely in your face . Gorgeous job .

Wow, i read this twice cause it was something so greatly written yet it didnt surprise me cause it was written by the greatest poet.
you seem to go deep in your thought and come out as a great poet opposite of other poet who got into their feeling through their poems, that is why you are the greatest.

First of all thanks for commenting on my poem second i find this a simple work of art in a poem well done
Take Care
xoHSxo

"Yet Beauty's rose withered and drooped
Within the manger of his brittle heart."

What a gorgeous format and you've done it wonderful justice
Your words hit the heart with such force and really present the reader with amazing imagery!
Love your vocab m'dear!
5/5
*Gem*

I absolutely loved it. The flow was superb. The imagery was fabulous. I even kind of liked how the style made in image itself. Not sure if that was intent or not, but I look at everything. Great job. I loved the emotion I could feel while reading it. 5/5

Again I love that you use a rich vocabulary and that you don't use simple wording.It just makes your poems that much better.The form was good and the flow was flawless.5/5

A beautiful piece as always. The flow was amazing for a structured poem. The way you broke down each line, made it a little harder to read the first time around because I kept wanting to pause at the end of each line. Which makes it spund kind of funny. It did make for a very interesting read. Besides that this really is wonderful. Powerful and full of vivid imagery. 5/5

marcella

Beautiful poem.. im not really a fan of this type of poetry but this one came out nicely...

Ooo I liked it. I've never seen anything quite like it before. I mean, the style yes I've seen, but the context. Never seen something quite as such as this. 10 points on creativity XD

The words and descriptions you used for every line were quite to my liking. Very well done. You have a talent, keep it up. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow this is very unique and impressive. I think the form is so cool. I think that it is a very good topic u chose too. Nice job! 5/5

Wow, the structure and how you set it up must've taken forever to figure out.
Cheers to that!
Lot's of emotion, keep em up!

Great use of the form. It shows the poets potential when a poem follows the form successfully and actually reads well. All was nicely written, but I slightly prefered the second stanza. Here the diction was more intense and sweeping.
The powerful use of poetic device throughout made this a very enjoyable read. Thanks for sharing.

Once again you have taken a unique style of poem and made it look rather simple to write. I know I'm always in for a good read whenever I come across a poem by you, but I'm always somehow still surprised at the end. I read this one over 2-3 times because it was so nicely done. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

Great write! I like the style. Your writing is always so unique. I love reading it. 5/5
*Brittney

I have nothing to say, this poem is spectacular just like all the rest!

Another awesome poem..you really have the talent of a poet and i admire you for that.. i enjoy reading on this one it was superbly wornderful, on how you keep the flow, the imagination and the meaning beyond.