Unattainable Love

by Lonely Little Dreamer   Aug 20, 2007


First meeting, within an instant
You have me, I'm yours.
Our eyes catch and my stomach flutters,
But you wear your mask so well.

Time passes with more glances.
Leaving me to fall helplessly,
Hoping you will catch me with your arms.
But still a statue you remain, unmoved and grounded.

My heart is finally consumed by you,
Given freely by my choice.
Anxiously I await to hear your voice,
But your silence echoes within my soul.

Broken now as the moments linger,
Confused, my mind aches from flooded thought.
Why must I always fall for the statuesque?
For that unattainable love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    Been here a time or two and it aint fun, tis another great poem, you have a way with words that captures the reader in pure tranquility, flawless grammer, another 5/5!!! keep up the great poems, and thank you for reading mine, means alot to me!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Lisa

    I absolutely loved this poem so I gave it a 5. I can totally relate to this..

  • 16 years ago

    by GoodMEMORIES

    Very well describing this piece. i think that this poem is unique and beautiful...

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    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    I loved the metaphor you used here. You vocab and the way you put it to use is just beautiful. Great imagery and flow here as well. The poem was really original and I think that made it more appealing too. 5/5

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  • 16 years ago

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