Mother is what your not

by lish   Aug 26, 2007


I remember the things you did
when i was a little kid
you used to torture and beat me
so i ran and i hid

You told me you didn't want me
And that I was supposed to die
What little did I know
You were probally high

I thought that you didn't love me
And didn't want me as yours
Countless times you kicked me out
And beat me for my flaws

It probally would have been different
If my father never died
You promised you would change
But countless times you lied

I cry myself to sleep at night
Wondering, what if id died
So i sit here in my corner
Ready to give my life to suicide

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  • 10 years ago

    by RobinAnn13

    This poem is so sad.
    Very emotional
    I think the flow of the poem is a little stressed at times but otherwise it's an awesome poem. You had very good word choice and I think a lot of people could relate to it.
    5/5
    <3<3

  • 10 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Hey this is so sad and touching...

    "I cry myself to sleep at night
    Wondering, what if id died
    So i sit here in my corner
    Ready to give my life to suicide "

    ^^ very emotional...

    one suggestion.. make all the i's capital
    also,
    "so i ran and i hid"
    so I ran and hid... sounds much better... but thats just a suggestion..

    overall a nice write... keep writing..

  • 10 years ago

    by she

    This is so sad,
    i wish it could have been different for you :[

    but you wrote this wonderfuly, i really felt the emotion.
    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Ahh. This was very hard to read.. I hope you won't abused liek this when you were little... by your mother.. that would be terrible. this poem all in all was really good.. you expresssed your emotions very well yet again.. however.. you had some spelling mistakes.. i realize you spelt probably wrong a few times.. so maybe you'd wanna check that out. overall, great job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Nowhere Man

    Great poem... i enjoyed reading it...