I have been a paramedic for 8 years, and you've hit this right on the head. I must say it is definetly one of the hardest, low paying, thankless jobs around. i thank you for this dedication. being appreciated helps make it all worth while, as well as helping those in need. a for sure 5/5 in my book. all the best ben thompson
I enjoyed the sentiment and grace of the poem. Medics definitely deserve more honour, and this is an effective and emotive work of praise.
As far as the flow of the poem is concerned, the formal usage of 'thee' and the occasional rhymes set up an expectation of a more regular rhyme scheme. Consequently I would suggest either eliminating the spot rhymes, or working the piece to include a more regular rhyme scheme.
However, this is a warmly emotive poem that sits quite nicely in the heart and mind as it is.
This is such a moving poem that should touch the heart, soul, and mind of the heroes that many times are just taken for granted. I am simply speechless at the inspiration of this well written poem with a most worthy theme.