Comments : Medics Creed

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Greatly written, very meaningful. I like the atmosphere in it, and the imagery is very vivid.
    My favorite stanza is:
    -Dear Lord, I pray to thee
    Grant wisdom to those
    out on our streets
    allow them knowledge
    to save many lives
    show them hope
    not one soul shall die-

    Keep up, 5/5 from me :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Nix

    I like the atmosphere of this piece. Flow is excellent and my favorite stanzas are first and fourth. Very original poem with a great message! It really deserves 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by judith redmount

    It is a poem from the heart. Pieces and bits flowing easily into reality of words.
    At the end, the last stanza, do you mean thee in stead of the.
    Apart from that, I like the poem so I give u 100%

  • 10 years ago

    by MaSkEdSoUl

    I really like this. I love the meaning of the poem. It flowed very well and the rhythm was excellent. This is an excellent write. Well Done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    May god listen to your wonderful prays dear, as always your works are full of talent and full of meaning that each word of you teach us a way to live, you are the biggest teacher of P&Q and we all love you dear.....

    a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it dear.

  • 10 years ago

    by Princess of snow

    Wow, it sounds amazing. I enjoyed
    reading it. The words choice is
    great. Thaks for commenting my poems.
    I give this a 5/5!!

  • 10 years ago

    by tyanna

    Simply amazing. Reading this poem put so many pictures in my mind.. I am almost in tears now! Medics are there to save lives, and when they can't, it must be devastating. It's just such a touching poem that makes you think..Great job, 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Sam Azam

    Vivid imagery. A unique topic, I enjoyed it a lot. It has a lot of meaning behind it, keep up the good work!

    Def a 5/5 from me.

    - Sam

  • 10 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that was truly beautiful i loved it alot 5/5 for sure.

  • 10 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wonderful poem...alot of meaning behind it.. im glad someone wrote a poem about this . i dont think i've read another one like it.

    the flow was great and it was very well written. nice job.5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by oldthings

    We do owe a lot to medics and doctors and all people of the sort, its great that you've written a piece of poetry dedicated to that.
    I loved the
    "when sirens wail,
    while we sleep
    let them know
    in our hearts they keep"
    beautiful the whole way through.
    thanks for giving me the chance to read it =)

  • 10 years ago

    by Lonesomeme

    Great job! This actually is a very important poem and I am going to be sure to pass it along if you dont mind. I have a few friends who are firemedics and they work unthinkable amounts of hours right now due to the fires here in California. Im not talking like a 24 hour shift I am talking like a 12 hour shift, rolling into three 24 hour shifts, thats 84 freakin hours straight!!!! anywho, Great job, every life saved is a miracle, every life lost is a tragedy. As long as the two balance out, we are safe. :) 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by cantchangeme

    Excellent poem 5/5
    i love this poem because it deals with something that isn't normally deaslt with.
    these people deserve praise and deserve the recognition.

    and i think them themselves would be very proud if they read this
    brilliantly written about an important subject.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jessica

    Awh, wow. This was very emotional for me. I have no idea why because it is in no way related to me but it pulled a heartstring and that is a sign of a truly great writer. The short lines added a great effect and made your words more powerful. I loved the subject and the poem has really touched me. The flow was good, the descriptions well done, and the emotion was very clear. 5/5, I'll nominate this for the weekly contest too.

  • 10 years ago

    by Patience

    Wow. thisk is such an amazing piece. The message is so meaningful. Loved it.

    Great job.

    Cicely

  • 10 years ago

    by Lonely Little Dreamer

    I love this poem. It has great flow and great imagery, but even more its unique and original. I have never read a poem about this topic. I like it when people think outside of just poems about heartache or love and chose something totally original. Great work. Keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by xPerfect Chaosx

    Oh wow Sherry hun. That is amazing. It's so true.. to think that no matter how hard they tried they still lose people.. it almost made me cry. It's an amazing poem. The flow and everything is just beautiful. 5/5 for sure. It's superb.. I'm running out of synoyms for amazing... lol. You are an aweosme poetess for sure. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.

    Much Love,
    .:Danielle:.

  • 10 years ago

    by lish

    Wow this poem is fgantastic, not much more to say i love it
    xx 5/5 from me

  • 10 years ago

    by nikki

    I am not a religion type, so i'm not gonna give my views, but from what i read in that poem, you have such a talent to grasp an idea and go with it. i loved the words you used. it was nicely penned. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Veamm

    It flowed well..nice words, is this a prayer or something?lol..best wishes keep it up^^