Greatly written, very meaningful. I like the atmosphere in it, and the imagery is very vivid.
My favorite stanza is:
-Dear Lord, I pray to thee
Grant wisdom to those
out on our streets
allow them knowledge
to save many lives
show them hope
not one soul shall die-
May god listen to your wonderful prays dear, as always your works are full of talent and full of meaning that each word of you teach us a way to live, you are the biggest teacher of P&Q and we all love you dear.....
Simply amazing. Reading this poem put so many pictures in my mind.. I am almost in tears now! Medics are there to save lives, and when they can't, it must be devastating. It's just such a touching poem that makes you think..Great job, 5/5
Wonderful poem...alot of meaning behind it.. im glad someone wrote a poem about this . i dont think i've read another one like it.
the flow was great and it was very well written. nice job.5/5
11 years ago
We do owe a lot to medics and doctors and all people of the sort, its great that you've written a piece of poetry dedicated to that.
I loved the
"when sirens wail,
while we sleep
let them know
in our hearts they keep"
beautiful the whole way through.
thanks for giving me the chance to read it =)
Great job! This actually is a very important poem and I am going to be sure to pass it along if you dont mind. I have a few friends who are firemedics and they work unthinkable amounts of hours right now due to the fires here in California. Im not talking like a 24 hour shift I am talking like a 12 hour shift, rolling into three 24 hour shifts, thats 84 freakin hours straight!!!! anywho, Great job, every life saved is a miracle, every life lost is a tragedy. As long as the two balance out, we are safe. :) 5/5
Awh, wow. This was very emotional for me. I have no idea why because it is in no way related to me but it pulled a heartstring and that is a sign of a truly great writer. The short lines added a great effect and made your words more powerful. I loved the subject and the poem has really touched me. The flow was good, the descriptions well done, and the emotion was very clear. 5/5, I'll nominate this for the weekly contest too.
11 years ago
Wow. thisk is such an amazing piece. The message is so meaningful. Loved it.
I love this poem. It has great flow and great imagery, but even more its unique and original. I have never read a poem about this topic. I like it when people think outside of just poems about heartache or love and chose something totally original. Great work. Keep it up!
Oh wow Sherry hun. That is amazing. It's so true.. to think that no matter how hard they tried they still lose people.. it almost made me cry. It's an amazing poem. The flow and everything is just beautiful. 5/5 for sure. It's superb.. I'm running out of synoyms for amazing... lol. You are an aweosme poetess for sure. Keep writing and I'll keep reading.
Wow this poem is fgantastic, not much more to say i love it
xx 5/5 from me
11 years ago
I am not a religion type, so i'm not gonna give my views, but from what i read in that poem, you have such a talent to grasp an idea and go with it. i loved the words you used. it was nicely penned. 5/5