Comments : Falling in love

  • 10 years ago

    by eNiGmAtIc pReY

    Good job except for some mistakes..but it's still good...

    5/5

    (",)

  • 10 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I like this one a lot, it is greatly written and truly beautiful yet so sad. I can relate to it. Whole poem has great flow and good choice of words.
    Keep writing!

  • 10 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Its marvellous........ 5/5

    luz and naz

  • 10 years ago

    by Melody

    Just B E A U T I F U L 5/5... keep it up=)
    ....Melody........=)

  • 10 years ago

    by amandalynn

    It was pretty cool.. =]]

    amandaxx.

  • 10 years ago

    by Adelle

    A good poem I like the way you asked questions the first stanza needs some puncuation but except for this its good.

  • 10 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Pare.. ganda na eh coz of the presence of the intense emotions.. yeah u brought up the perfect emotions on this... yet just like what i told u, u keep on repeating the same words.. kya u yan! kulang pa sa konting aus.. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

  • 10 years ago

    by TwiztidJuggalette

    I really liked this piece..It came straight from the heart and I really like that about poetry. The flow was a little off but other than that it was a really good enjoyable read...Keeep it up..

    5/5 from me..

  • 10 years ago

    by amoxi

    This poem had a lot better rhyming i like it better than the others you did a good job on this one

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This style is very original, and the poem reflects the feelings of falling in love
    5>>>>>>

  • 10 years ago

    by Tricky Daze

    It was so sweet and I liked the flow of it
    But
    Thats-That's

    My fave lines are;

    I didn't know you yet,
    But still you get
    My heart to forgets
    All the pain and the regret

    Keep it up,
    Laura

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    The flow wasn't perfect, yet this was a lovely piece, that was penned simply yet well.
    Love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 10 years ago

    by janiL

    Nice! ^_^

    i think something was off, but who cares? the poem itself was beautiful and heart-felt..^__^

    i s0o can relate.. i made something like this before, "i knew what i wanted and it was you
    but still it feels wrong it feels untrue.."

    this piece is simple and seems very sincere.
    nice! 5/5! ^_____^

  • 10 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    The poem itself was pretty good.

    The first two stanza's flowed smoothly, but your last two seemed forced.
    I think you repeated words alot.

    Im still gonna give you a 4/5, cause I know this peice can be improved.

    -- Elaine.

  • 10 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Hmm wow nice expressing those words... it has a great meaning to all the lovers.. well some people happen this kind of situation.. but nice job..

  • 10 years ago

    by judith redmount

    I like the combination of the love that is unreal
    with the girl that you don't know yet.
    perfectly combined in one

  • 10 years ago

    by nikki

    Wow. i loved this, it was very deep, and it had so much emotions. it was beautifully written. 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    Love is sometimes real and sometimes even surreal and you might be in the right track dear. He he i liked your poem and its content. Just delete the s in forgets. tc

  • 10 years ago

    by denita

    Hey this is a great poem.

  • 10 years ago

    by Choose xX Alex Xx Life

    Maybe a bit simple in the vocab but a sweet poem still. i liked the way you described how oyu felt. Nice job xxx alex xxx