Good job except for some mistakes..but it's still good...

5/5

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I like this one a lot, it is greatly written and truly beautiful yet so sad. I can relate to it. Whole poem has great flow and good choice of words.
Keep writing!

Its marvellous........ 5/5

luz and naz

Just B E A U T I F U L 5/5... keep it up=)
....Melody........=)

It was pretty cool.. =]]

amandaxx.

A good poem I like the way you asked questions the first stanza needs some puncuation but except for this its good.

Pare.. ganda na eh coz of the presence of the intense emotions.. yeah u brought up the perfect emotions on this... yet just like what i told u, u keep on repeating the same words.. kya u yan! kulang pa sa konting aus.. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

I really liked this piece..It came straight from the heart and I really like that about poetry. The flow was a little off but other than that it was a really good enjoyable read...Keeep it up..

5/5 from me..

This poem had a lot better rhyming i like it better than the others you did a good job on this one

This style is very original, and the poem reflects the feelings of falling in love
5>>>>>>

It was so sweet and I liked the flow of it
But
Thats-That's

My fave lines are;

I didn't know you yet,
But still you get
My heart to forgets
All the pain and the regret

Keep it up,
Laura

The flow wasn't perfect, yet this was a lovely piece, that was penned simply yet well.
Love Tara-Kay
x

Nice! ^_^

i think something was off, but who cares? the poem itself was beautiful and heart-felt..^__^

i s0o can relate.. i made something like this before, "i knew what i wanted and it was you
but still it feels wrong it feels untrue.."

this piece is simple and seems very sincere.
nice! 5/5! ^_____^

The poem itself was pretty good.

The first two stanza's flowed smoothly, but your last two seemed forced.
I think you repeated words alot.

Im still gonna give you a 4/5, cause I know this peice can be improved.

-- Elaine.

Hmm wow nice expressing those words... it has a great meaning to all the lovers.. well some people happen this kind of situation.. but nice job..

I like the combination of the love that is unreal
with the girl that you don't know yet.
perfectly combined in one

Wow. i loved this, it was very deep, and it had so much emotions. it was beautifully written. 5/5

Love is sometimes real and sometimes even surreal and you might be in the right track dear. He he i liked your poem and its content. Just delete the s in forgets. tc

Hey this is a great poem.

Maybe a bit simple in the vocab but a sweet poem still. i liked the way you described how oyu felt. Nice job xxx alex xxx