Comments : Your Guitar Gently Weeps

  • 10 years ago

    by Bryan

    Love the image the guitar paints, tis another excellent poem cindy, love the flow as with all you poems, i give this a perfect 5/5!!! please keep them coming!!!

  • 10 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful sad poems you penned here Cindy dear, remain a memories that couldn't erase. "A person who has come into your life has come either to teach you something, or to learn something from you." I hope thing are good with you and yours, always know that I'll be here if you need sometimes.... Be safe. Hugs... Bert.

  • 10 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Cindy, such a sad write, that was a pleasure tp read, very well pened with emotion and faultless imagery.
    Keep writing
    Love Tara-Kay
    x

  • 10 years ago

    by Lithium

    I absolutely love this poem i almost feel as if i have lived this myself, those old days still freshly painted in our memories will never fade. i really feel a connection with this poem and the words, i can't express how much emotion i am overhwelmed by it is truely a magical piece bringing back the best of days, xox sam

  • 10 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    Only true love has the power to make us this sad once it's gone. Gratefull for all that is given to us, but ever so sad for knowing we have to face the rest of our lives without that special person.....
    You have the skills to turn your sadness into something as beautiful as this poem.

    Take care,

    Ingrid

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    Wishing you were back with me
    Your love once again to keep
    Strumming fingers across strings
    Your guitar gently weeps

    awwwwwwwe it realy touched my heart. great sorrows and great poem. you worte 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Wake

    Oh-my-god.... a poignant , simply breathtaking piece.. left me speechless.
    and an 'oh-so-amazing' image is what it painted

    "..Strumming fingers across strings
    Your guitar gently weeps.."

    such a beautiful line tht hurts deep within..
    an awe-some write. no doubt.

    ~Wake~

  • 10 years ago

    by Dixiedaisy

    Cindy,
    You just don't realize the depths your poetry speaks. This is the kind of love that most people only dream of. You write of John and the memories you have shared in the past and it comes to reality there is such True Love. Passionate, unbridled, true and honest vows that no matter come what may with every breath you take and eternally you will again share that love. I know the time you had together wasn't nearly long enough, just wanted you to know that the love you shared with John is reciprocated in these pieces you share with us. Such a beautiful moment of many you have shared with your love. Awesome Job,
    Kay

  • 10 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    Sad but beautifully written.Each stanza waas very strong.But the ending was amazing.This poem is very touching.Well done!
    Take care <3
    Ems

  • 10 years ago

    by ben thompson

    Awesome write cindy. your words flow masterfully

  • 10 years ago

    by ©romoж

    Such a beautiful sad poems, tribute to the love you love... to loss someone we love it's great painful, anyway, great poem though. beautiful ended!

  • 10 years ago

    by alka mendiratta

    5/5.Cindy,a perfect piece again.This one reflects the divine love you experienced with John.One can see the depth of love between the two of you.God bless.

  • 10 years ago

    by Fan Angeleo

    Very deep poem, keep on writing.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lisa

    Amazing poetry,reminds me of my father,he was truly passionate about guitar.
    keeep it up and when you have the time,please feel free to look at my work and pass along suggestions.
    take care
    -Lisa

  • 10 years ago

    by chavii

    Its a wonderful tribute cindy, those wonderful memories of you and john are most precious gift.
    Wishing you were back with me
    Your love once again to keep
    Strumming fingers across strings
    Your guitar gently weeps

    This lines are brilliant and so heartfelt.
    Great work again.

    Love and regards
    chavii.

  • 10 years ago

    by Void

    Hey. I've only just found you on the site now, and I'm so happy to see that you have the strength you do. Your poems are beautiful, and never without emotion - that has to be my favourite thing in a writer. The rhythm is like you're doing it to please the reader, but I'm sure it was something all for yourself. I hope things are looking up, and I hope you always have that guitar. I know you'll always have your husband.
    I can't offer any critique on it, mostly because I never would on something so personal anyway; you should always keep it as is, when it has enough of you in it. I find that if you change and edit things too much, it doesn't hold quite as much of what you felt as it would've if you had just left it. However, I am also leaving you with no harsh words, because I don't think there's anything critical to be said. It's a beautiful (and heartbreaking) story, written with beautiful words. Thank you for sharing it with me :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Deana

    The imagery in this is great Cindy,I can see the scene under the tree and hear the romantic sound of the guitar, a wonderful memory to treasure.awesome job!

  • 10 years ago

    by Veamm

    From happy moments to sad..i was a good rhythm..and it rhymes so well..

    keep it up!

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    "Sitting holding your guitar
    Images play through my mind
    Running fingers across sleek wood
    Happy thoughts again I find"

    These lines were the most beautiful in this poem! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    Wow... this is one of the few poems I've read that literally made me cry.

    This piece is so beautiful... I honestly don't even know what to say. It left me speechless.