by Pamela G
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I cried while reading this poem. Beautiful. |
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Oh Cindy, such a bittersweet piece. You have such strong emotion that I saw everything with my own eyes, heard the guitar, etc. Thanks for sharing this. :) |
by Marjan
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This was one of the best of the saddest poems I’ve ever read. |
by Sarah
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Wonderful cindy |
by Chelsey
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Cindy if you got anything from Johns love...if you wonder if it had an impact on anything...know this....the love you two shared gives a 16 yr old girl in Toledo Ohio so much hope that I can some day have that....that the people who say "theres no such thing as love" or...."love doesn't exsist these days" are just a bunch of liers who have no hope for themselves...because you've shown me with these beautiful poems that you can fall in love at a young age if you do it smartly....... |
by njabulo b
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This is a best poem again by u Cindy, i like its- the content and everything and the jumping rhyms it perfect. |
by Elapsed
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A great write.. sad but a joy to read. |
by Rakesh
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WOW Cindy - very heartfelt ,it directly goes and hits something there and makes one shudder , it does flash into my mind all the bygone days the b'tful days and makes me melancholic. |
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I really like this poem, its sad yet full of happiness from the past, i can totally relate |
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Uberr good! |
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Very sad--it reminds me of my ex and me how hard it was. She played the guitar and sang to me. |
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This paints such a broad and beautiful painting of words, images and emotions. A sad, almost haunting, but also a happy, loving and beautiful memory to hold on to forever. Excellent, Cindy, as always. |
by chind
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Really sad |
by Gem
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"Years now have come and gone |
by Cindy
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Amazing poem...i really love it...its very sad and very well written great job.... ~*~Cindy~*~ |
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"Wishing you were back with me |
by debbylyn
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Reminds me of my fav George Harrison song....beautifully written....love the imagery and music metaphors.... |
by Corinne
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A wonderful scene you've painted. As a guitarist, I of course responded to that aspect of the poem, as well as the deep love for your John. |
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I love it how you started and finnished at the same spot. 5/5 |
by amber
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Hi cindy, i'm a friend of pauls, i just wanted to say that i'm sorry to hear about you getting put in the hospital but i'm very pleased to hear that you are doing well. I hope to read more poetry from you. About the poem--i love it! it's amazing. I can feel so much pain behind this.....taylor swift don't have anything on you :) you're an amazing poetess. I love it! 5/5 |