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by Twisted Heart Sep 19, 2007
Love, romance /
Befall thy love my sweet embrace
Upon this night thy truth be told
Into your arms I wish to race
Among the stars my heart doth hold
In eyes awakened from thy dreams
I see your soul so sound and pure
And through the harshness love does bring
Sweet ecstasy my heart endures.
Come love, my love, upon this night
A chance that I should bid you well
Inside thy arms I wish to hide
Upon thy breath a whisper tell.
Distracted am I by thy grace
Thy lips the shade of cherry wine
Fair porcelain adorns thy face
Thy body passion in my mind.
I, but a soul unworthy fool
For lucky have I come to be
Among the stars my heart is ruled
Forever my love clings to thee.
So beautifully constructed....love the style, rhyme and word usage.....absolutely beautiful love poem!
by Nikko McMorbid
I imagined those words while standing beside a love in the middle of a full moon light. Tis so romantic.
I really envy you being able to write in this style,you are so good at it,I think it is the most romantic of all among the different styles.This is really great.
That was a really good poem...you have a way with words! :]
Wow, this is wonderful. Usually I'm kind of like, "Meh" when it comes to old English terms. I'm a modern lass. =P But this was truly amazing. The flow was perfect, the wording was perfect.
It was a beautiful poem. :)