What do I do when you say you don't care?
And the pain is far too deep for me to bear.
I wonder will you even notice I am gone?
Will you come to my funeral to say so long?
Will you see me in my coffin, and kiss my head?
It's hurts to know the only kiss ill get from you, is when I'm dead.
But why did it have to be this way?
It was you, nobody else, who got me from day to day.
To know you are with somebody else, much pain it brings.
It always hurts when I hear about those kinds of things
Do you not love me because the way I wear my hair?
I would go bald if you want me to, if it makes you care.
I really hope you will read this letter?
If you would of only given me, a chance to show you I could have treated you better.
Than all the other guys who you chose instead of me
God damn it I told you, that we were meant to be.
What is it about you that makes me feel so good?
If I could have gotten over you, trust me, I most certainly would.
I cannot put in plain words on how I am feeling.
My heart is on fire, it is not to appealing.
It feels like Ive died a thousand times inside
Holding you a little closer, just a little more in my mind.
Ever time I see you with another guy, I die again.
But I would die a million times, if we could just be friends.
It is getting hard to count all the times my hearts has torn.
I really wish sometimes, that I wasn't even born.
Someone please tell me what this torture is for.
I really don't want to love you anymore.
So it's now that I sit in my bed.
It will be here tomorrow where they will find me dead.
Because this hole in my heart is getting pretty deep.
I've got a picture of you in my hand; it's the one you said I could keep.
Now the blood is going every where wow I wish you could see.
All of this could have been avoided if you would have just loved me.
Man I haven't said all I have to say, so I have to hurry.
Because it's getting hard to breath now, and my visions going blurry.
So I can't really see your pretty little smile.
Don't worry my life will be over in just a little while.
I'm going to take these last few minuets to sit back and reminisce.
I'm sorry but the last line I can write will be this.
Your poem was full of emotion pain and unrequited love it inspired a memory in me that I had almost forgotten. Another young man who died because he thought he would never be able to be with his love. He never got to see any of his tomorrows and I always wonder what good things were never done because he left too soon
The raw emotion used to write this is really amazing. I think it takes guts to write about something like this. I looked at your other poems too and I think you should step away from rhymes. Not being so tangled in making everything rhyme will give you more freedom and let you be less literal. I know... I spent years only writing in rhymes, but its cool to try something new :)
Great poem. i could really feel the pain and emotion in it. im sorry that someone hurt you bad enough to create the inspiration for this...ive been there myself a time or two...but again great poem...keep up the good work....;D