Small Town

by FridusBlueheaven   Oct 29, 2007


Title : Small Town
Written By : Fridus Blueheaven

Small town, where I grew my little heart
I've been there for so long, right from the start
Days are harsh, but it's a lot of fun to be there
When in a small town, there's nothing to despair

Small town, where everything is so small after all
In that place maybe you can hardly find the mall
But people always there just to return your call
Apple jams and grapes are there when it's fall

Small town, I've been loved and caressed endlessly
A place that really understand everything about me
Cared and love given there with the sincerity
But now, I'm not there and I'm over the sea

Small town, where I found everything is simple
People are nice and I found everyone so humble
A place that surely everyday I would love to come
When I ask about little love, I know I'd get some

Small town, and tonight I will be alone for more
I'm over there and can't have everything like before
But I always wish that I could be there real soon
To see beautiful night and I'll be looking for the moon

Small town, day after day and it's my time to back
Clothes are in my bag and everything is already packed
Well it's my time to return, I'm no more in the roam
On my way back now and I smell everything but home
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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought it was pretty good, but at parts the rhyming seemed forced, or a line or two didnt sound quite right, it was still good though, but im going to have to give this a 4/5, srry mate, it was still good though

    Stephanie Naylor

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    A poem about life .. nice one .. i thought you only write love poems.. every poem you made me read r all love poems.. this is something different. i love it =] another great poem made by you!

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    I really liiked this poem....it had niice flow...and i liike the ryming in it!!! great job!!!

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Simply amazing.
    i liked the rhyme scheme
    and i like the wayy you worded this. :]
    it's a beautiful poem
    and deserves a 5/5 from me! :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Uhm.. I believe you like the use of repetitions? Anyway..

    You've created another beautiful poem.
    (I think this poem is about the place you grew up - sorry if I'm wrong)

    I think every line is great... well except for one. I didn't get this line that much..

    But people always there just to return your call

    I think it should be...

    But people (are) always there just to return your call

    *This is just a suggestion*

    Anyway good job on this one! :)

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