I've lost all track of time

by VSambulance   Nov 2, 2007


Clocks have lost all track of time
oh, what a catastrophy!
So we bob our heads to the tick of our watch,
afraid they'll die out eventually...

We march in tune with the second hand,
to always know our beat.
While the boys and girls from outer space,
are making clocks in their backseats!

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Queen

    ANother wow..Simply words and simply written yet complicate my mind..That was excellent...Very unique and brilliant imagery from you...Good job..

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Wow... this is excellently written...
    really... the word flow and the concept...everything great..
    I really liked it..

  • 17 years ago

    by Ash

    A really unique piece of writing. Even the topic is quite different from the norm, The flow was good and the simplicity of the poem just added more effect. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Shinobi

    A very interesting piece. The choosing of words here is unique. The whole subject is different. I like it, but it could be longer 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by xXxemzxXx

    Great poem its very creative it gives people something to think about as well i loved it amazing write :)

    --emz--

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