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by VSambulance Nov 2, 2007
Life, society /
Clocks have lost all track of time
oh, what a catastrophy!
So we bob our heads to the tick of our watch,
afraid they'll die out eventually...
We march in tune with the second hand,
to always know our beat.
While the boys and girls from outer space,
are making clocks in their backseats!
by The Queen
ANother wow..Simply words and simply written yet complicate my mind..That was excellent...Very unique and brilliant imagery from you...Good job..
by Lonely Rider
Wow... this is excellently written...
really... the word flow and the concept...everything great..
I really liked it..
A really unique piece of writing. Even the topic is quite different from the norm, The flow was good and the simplicity of the poem just added more effect. 5/5
A very interesting piece. The choosing of words here is unique. The whole subject is different. I like it, but it could be longer 4/5
Great poem its very creative it gives people something to think about as well i loved it amazing write :)