There you go again, muttering your fabricated stories
haven't you realized they're falling on deaf ears?
Course not, you're living in your own whimsical fairy land
Where everything is made of sunshine and lollipops
It's so effortless to see through your misrepresentation
Sweetheart, you really must think that I was born yesterday
Wrapped in wolf's clothing, beautiful outside; cunning within
I can easily see the danger lurking in those baby blue eyes
Didn't your mother ever take the time out to teach you
You shouldn't play games with someone who can play better
Weaving yourself up so tightly in those tangled loops
Do you really think you'll loosen them before suffocation?
Tell me sweetheart, does she even have any idea about us
Or have you been stringing us both along all this time?
What's that on your face, an expression of surprise?
What's the matter, didn't you realize you'd been caught?
Remember that saying, hell hath no fury like a woman scorned
Well now you're about to find out just how true that proverb is
After all those tender kisses we shared, whispered I love you's
You're about to pay the price for all your counterfeit words.
I see you have alot of ageressive work here and you can sometimes relate to alot of what you say but there does come a time that there is more to life then proving paople wrong or getting back at them I wonder if you can relate that in your work more Plot121.
Wow, excellent write like always. I loved the flow of this poem it was flawless. It was very deep and had a lot of meaning that was vivdly displayed by your expertise in using words in a creative way. Great Job!!!
A tale of sweet revenge Again flawless, perfect, deep, and heartfelt. I can realte. i love your style of wit and scarsim mixed it really get the point across to the reader. Again as with all the poems of yours that I have read there is no room for improvement You deserve nothing less than 5/5 and although I believe you might actually deserve something better it is the highest I can give.