Life

by Tiffany   Jan 27, 2008


Close your eyes and imagine a garden in the winter time
Do you see how it is icy, cold, and dead?
Now slowly let the flowers grow and the trees start to bloom
Do you see how everything is alive, green and anew?
But yet again there comes a time were every thing must die.
So the flowers start to wilt, and the leaves start to fall from the trees, and now we are back to the winter garden again.
Now open your eyes and look around you
Do you see the life thats there?
Life is a continuous cycle that will never stop
We are born, and we grow up and soon after we die and then life start again.
Life is like a garden
Becasue it is a continuous cycle that never stops.

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  • 15 years ago

    by loulou

    This is an amazing poem!I liked it so much and you wrote something really special about life...so it's a very good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    Close your eyes and imagine a garden in the winter time
    Do you see how it is icy, cold, and dead?
    Now slowly let the flowers grow and the trees start to bloom
    Do you see how everything is alive, green and anew?
    But yet again there comes a time were every thing must die.
    So the flowers start to wilt, and the leaves start to fall from the trees, and now we are back to the winter garden again.

    this was great stanza and great poetry! I will love to continue to read all your poems as life goes on, The friendship we share will never end. You are my friend and I care about you. I am glad you and I and Justin started talking to each other. You guys are great friends.

    this poem I rated 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jes Miller

    I like the way you wrote it...u can picture everything. and its really true...everything that is born must die..its just the way life is...

  • 16 years ago

    by Fanny

    I imagine everything and this poem makes you see a lot of stuff not a lot of poets can do that in their poem but you did and thats why this is a great poem . thanx for the comment

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