I've destroyed who I am

Nothing matters and nothing ever will,
I'm tired of living up to your expectations
And living with your limitations.

*I liked this. I would maybe change the second line to "I'm tired of trying to live up to youe expectations". Other than that. I thought you did a nice job. I like the tone you use here.*

I've destroyed who I am to satisfy a careless Trent
I have nothing of who I was, and I hate who I've become
I cant even remember what if feels like to actually be happy

*I liked this staza the most. I can really relate to what you are saying. Such a sad poem :( *

I'm lost in a world of hate, sorrow, and hopelessness.
The hate of myself,
the sorrow of my past
and the hopelessness of never being happy.

*Wow...love this part. I love how you break down each part and explain it's importance and how each has affected you. Clever*

i can't escape

*This single last line, is so heartbreaking. It makes things seem so final. Like there is no coming back from the pain. Nice work hun. Keep it up. Nik*

Wow I can clearly see the emotions here. You did a great job. I know how it feels and it gives in insight on how you felt.
5/5 keep up the good work

Great job expressing how it feels to be trapped that way! I can't say that I've experienced this, but you've done a good job of showing me how it feels to others who have. Excellent piece.

Hey really nice. I really liekd it
keep up the really greak work!
5/5
<3tay

Amazing job on this one. It was emotional, the flow was flawless, and it was very easy for me to relate to. I love this line, "I have nothing of who I was, and I hate who I've become". Beautifully written, m'dear. Overall: 5.5 (:

-- Steph.