The Reflection

by Beautiful Disaster   Oct 15, 2011


Living in a world of hate and lies,
facing the day with grieving eyes.

The reflection of you always daunting,
Never free from the taunting.

Dreading to endure the pain of tomorrow,
embracing the world with arms of sorrow

A beautiful girl with gorgeous eyes
hidden in a world of her demise

Realizing my fate not knowing what to do,
I ask the mirror do you reflect me? or do i reflect you?

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  • 11 years ago

    by Xanthe

    This is well-penned. As I read it, I didn't even stop. Shows the flow was awesome (for me, anyway). The theme is dark and beautiful.

    'A beautiful girl with gorgeous eyes
    hidden in a world of her demise'
    This part stood out for me. Rhymes flowed well and at the same time gives a great imagery.

    5/5 :) Keep writing!

    -X

  • 12 years ago

    by nouriguess

    Hello, Jessie!

    Your rhymes made a lovely yet sad tone, and gave depth to the poem, well-done. ;)

    'The reflection of you always daunting,
    Never free from the taunting'

    ^

    I just guess that these two lines were a little bit...just a little bit 'weird'? I don't know, they didn't flow much well. =/ Maybe that's just me! :)

    Good poetry, nevertheless, sadness all over the piece. Keep writing, lovely.

  • 12 years ago

    by Solus

    I liked this one, reminds me of when I stare into the mirrior. Short yes, but ity said what it needed to.

  • 12 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Great write, it was amazing and the emotion was so good, I believe that you done really good on this poem
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by LoreNz0

    A very good write, u capture the emotion in scenes so vividly. clear and concise with a good flow.

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