What's the point of life, if one can't live its own?
Must you think that I am so small and breakable?
I am a teenager that must fend for themselves.
And I can't have you tell me that I am unable.
How can such a "Holy" man be so evil inside?
Did it ever occur to you that I am not blithe?
My mom loves me, and wants whats best.
Living with my mother won't hurt me insdie.
How can family be so bias to a past thats gone?
Antagonism only makes this world so blind.
Families lack the sense of self preservation.
But only one will have the courage to have a mind.
Unruly kids linger and run around homes.
And yet the parents just don't seem to fear.
But one that did drugs, drank, and ran away,
They are the ones that we must not keep near.
Though they want to fight to keep the kids they love.
Or be spit in the face at a family who doesn't bother.
Grand kids don't mind anymore or aren't important,
Because of the mother left their only father.
Families become so blind and unaware.
They only hear what they want to hear.
Or can be so selfish and only care about themselves,
Because losing their reputation is their biggest fear.
This was good.
To be honest, I got kind of confused I didn't really know what this was about. But i'm also sick so it might just be my head right now lol. I'm not too sure. But the over all of it was great.
Wow, you have a lot of talent... your choice of words is always phenominal... and every line just blows me away. This message is so clear... perfect write... I would just spell check "inside" in this line
Third stanza is my favorite one, you described your opinion on a very clear way.
This seems to me like a exile of emotions and honestly little forced, it is interesting, it kept my attention but you used same words few times and that left a negative impression on me.
Overall I am not a big fan of poems from this category and I am not too impressed by this poem.