Comments : Jealous Love~

  • 18 years ago

    by Red Charm

    Wow great poem. That is so sad that its true. Beautiful way to tell it. Keep it up, Red

  • 18 years ago

    by Cimara

    omg,wow!!! that was one of the most amazing poems i have ever written. it flowed beautifully and i really really liked it. you have an increadible talent. keep it up..
    love cim xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Cimara

    omg,wow!!! that was one of the most amazing poems i have ever written. it flowed beautifully and i really really liked it. you have an increadible talent. keep it up..
    love cim xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie Lynn

    wow. that was very good! im sorry that is a true story, that is very sad. well, i have read a few of your poems now and i like all that i have read, keep it up and i'll keep reading.xoxo

    Katie

  • 18 years ago

    by **~xoxo~**

    Wow that was a good poem I cant believe that is true that is really sad... I feel bad for the little boy growing up the rest of his life with no one to look up to but the people he meets! wow that would be hard

  • 18 years ago

    by Bleeding_Red_Fallen_Angel

    Oh my gosh this is soo good. I'm so sorry this happened..wounderful write though. >3jess

  • 18 years ago

    by M

    Wow very nice rhymes and a real shocker. great that you made a poem out of this

  • 18 years ago

    by .Just Jessie.

    Awww...That is so sad. Its not easy being all alone especially being at a young age.

  • 18 years ago

    by I.Dont.Own.Emotion.I.RENT.

    omg this is sooo amazing!!!! thx 4 commenting on my poem (i am nothing) means a lot to me. anyway keep up the great work!!! .:lex:.

  • 18 years ago

    by John

    this is an awesome poem one of the only ones that actually kept my attention the whole time thanks for sharing

  • 18 years ago

    by John

    this is an awesome poem one of the only ones that actually kept my attention the whole time thanks for sharing

  • 18 years ago

    by Insane Inside And Out

    Good job and please keep up the writing!

  • 18 years ago

    by Unwanted Lamia

    it happened down the street? that's a little creepy, but it more sad that it's really true. You told the story great tho. i think it had a great rythim (i hate speeling) to it. i hope you keep up with your writing, I love it!

  • 18 years ago

    by HOLLY ARMER

    Horrifying! Brilliantly written, packed full of emotion without losing the flow! Well done~Holly

  • 18 years ago

    by ~*Babygurl*~

    This is a very good poem. keep writing

  • 18 years ago

    by JL

    omg thats horrible! but u wrote the story beautifully! 5/5

  • thats so terrible that the little boy had to see that!! but its a really great poem
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley

    wow. this is horrible, i cant believe it really happend thats so sad..the way you worded it, its a great poem, but a horrible story. my poem is true the one you commented on. thanks i appreciate that. this poem made me cry,...anyways hugs,-hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by AhmadAfaneh

    WOW! nice job i know that i have a rele long way to reach this perfect level in writing.

    Plz read some of my poems n give me some comment abt how i can be like u in writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by ßeAuTiFuLlY~bRoKeи

    OMG! i remember when that happened... that is horrible!